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batyatoon ([personal profile] batyatoon) wrote2008-02-19 09:56 pm

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Two new drabbles for the Heroes S1 Title Project!

The first one turned out way too long. I'm calling it a double drabble.

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Fandom: Terry Pratchett's Discworld (with a non-spoilery shoutout to somebody else)
Title: 1. Genesis

This we are taught: in the beginning the world was made, and the great Turtle caught it on his back and saved it from falling into the void.

The truth, as with all beginnings, is more complicated.


In the absence of a dense magical field, matter tends to collect around stars, usually in whorls that gradually form into spheres. But free-floating magic has its own attraction, which matter tends to interpret as gravity.

Watch with an attention span measured in millenia and see the accretion mass build, flattening as it grows. Watch the eddies where two smaller pockets of matter coalesce, swinging in a dance about the larger part; watch as one of them compresses impossibly under the field pressure, hot and dense enough to ignite.

At some indefinable point the mass is no longer an amorphous blob but a half-molten disc, floating in the silent dark between stars. Strange elements recombine in the magical field, forming an atmosphere; the denser of the two orbiting spheres finally bursts into fusion fire, pouring down heat and light. Soon the first water molecules will form, and soon after that will come the first rains.

And sometime in there a presence arrived, unseen even by our omniscient eyes. The disc is no longer floating, but being carried.

See the Turtle of enormous girth; on Her shell She holds the earth.

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Fandom: Firefly
Title: 18. Parasite

She don't do nothin for this crew, not a ruttin thing. Like them critters, what d'you call em, that hook on to bigger critters and just ride along, takin a share of the food.

I pull my weight and I earn my pay on this boat, can't nobody say I don't.

But day she takes a butcher knife to me, half of em run to her. Like she's the one got hurt, stead of the one did the hurtin. And day Mal finally takes it into his head to talk about maybe she's dangerous, they all keep sayin the same thing: I don't think she'd ever hurt any of us.

Third time they say that, it ain't even worth bringin up the butcher knife again.

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I need some ideas for additional fandoms. *considers*
newredshoes: possum, "How embarrassing!" (damn straight this is Ohio.)

[personal profile] newredshoes 2008-02-20 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
That first one is totally, totally gorgeous.

Oh, man, Jayne. Just. *babbles*

*thinks* Dark Angel? Mythology?
newredshoes: possum, "How embarrassing!" (I am a stud in orange.)

[personal profile] newredshoes 2008-02-20 03:24 am (UTC)(link)
DA is ridiculous. But the secondary characters are awesome. I'm compulsively watching for the pre-Dean Jensen. Every time he makes a Dean face, I squeal and thrash about. It's great exercise!
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[personal profile] genarti 2008-02-20 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
Yyyyyep.

*hugs Jayne*

Poor guy.

[identity profile] livetta.livejournal.com 2008-02-20 03:08 am (UTC)(link)
:D

I like muchly... you have this way of grabbing a reader's attention, snap!, just like that.

[identity profile] agoodshinkickin.livejournal.com 2008-02-20 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
Because I am selfish I think you should write mine.
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[personal profile] adiva_calandia 2008-02-20 03:32 am (UTC)(link)
:D!!!

Fandoms: Young Wizards, Feline Wizards, Tam Lin, L'Engle, The Princess Bride . . .
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[personal profile] skygiants 2008-02-20 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
That Jayne drabble is awesome.

(So is the Discworld one! But I am feeling the Jayne especially right now, seeing as I promised to play him tonight. :D)
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[personal profile] infiniteviking 2008-02-20 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
W00t! Great atmosphere in the Discworld piece, and Jayne... heh. He's got a point.

[identity profile] crazedcrusader.livejournal.com 2008-02-20 11:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I've been considering a His Majesty's Dragon drabble or two....and have you read The Dresden Files?

Also, EEE, drabbles. And aww, Jayne, honey. *schnuggles him* *carefully*