HOW DID I KNOW you would pick that one. *giggling* Zuko's moustache was kind of symbolic of the main problem I had writing it, which was that I kept trying to make things hilarious and then they did not work. Like the scene where Sokka stumbles in on Toph and Katara fighting and they both turn on him -- I had a much funnier take on that in mind originally, until I realized that Katara using bloodbending on Sokka was (a) inevitable, and (b) not something I wanted to make readers laugh at.
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